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Thread: Top of my head.....A freestyle if you will.

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    She walked away
    I don't know what to say
    All I could do was look
    As she walked slowly
    A single tear ran down my cheek
    Why did I say it why did I make her do it
    We will never be the same
    After
    The
    Abortion


    Ok just so you all know, this is not about me nore did it ever happen to me or anyone I know. It's just somthing that poped into my melon.

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    It popped in real well, Ski. Well done.

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    Branflakes. The Ninja Lesbian. The Milk Getter. The Hair Gel Getter. I get it all!
    The one Necro calls "brain".
    I walk the path, trying not to get pulled into the weeds.
    "walking away, no longer running."
    "See that star...the one shining brighter than all the others? I know the girl who hung it there."

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    *shivers*

    Very effective. Last line drops like the bomb it was meant to be...

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    Very good Ski.

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    - "How do you know the chosen ones? No greater love hath a man than he lay down his life for his friend. Not for millions, not for glory, not for fame... for one person. In the dark. Where no one will ever know or see." - Sebastion, Babylon 5
    - INDECISION is the key to FLEXIBILITY.

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